Monday, June 25, 2012

Welcome to the All-new Poetry Monday!

Over here at my little neck of the woods, I have a Poetry Monday once a month. I love poetry. I love children's poetry. I love reading and writing poetry. I love rhyme and word play and every element that can be found in poetry. So why the focus to share with the world?

As with all my reasons for blogging, the biggest one is to motivate me to do the things I know I need to do to reach all my writing goals. I have a huge idea brewing in my mind regarding writing, poetry, children, teaching, and FUN! When I find the manpower, the business savvy, and the wherewithal to bring my idea into fruition, I'll definitely share it with all you you. Until then, I'll use my once-a-month Poetry Monday sessions to help prepare me for the future. Hopefully, we can all learn a bit and have a lot of fun.

According to my new schedule, my Mondays are supposed to look like this:
1st Monday: High Five Interview
2nd Monday: Pot-O-Gold Blogger Award
3rd Monday: Poetry Monday
4th Monday: Contest Winners and Announcements
But June has looked like this:
1st:  High Five Interview (featuring Kate Slater)
2nd: skipped
3rd: Pot-O-Gold (a week late - award goes to Corey Rosen Schwartz)
4th: Poetry Monday (pushed out another week)
(There are no contest winners to announce this month - that'll be July for SURE! The only announcement is that Summer Entries will soon be accepted as of July 1st.)

So let's jump right in!

If you're anything like me, you love poetry too! I collect children's poetry books! I scour the sale racks, the used book stores, the library sales, yard sales, and newly released titles. Today, I'm just kind of introducing the feature. In the following months, we'll explore lots of different formats, look at an example or two, and try our own hand at the form. We'll play, comment, and have a grand ol' time.

So, what are some of your favorite poetry books? Who are some of your favorite poets? Dr. Suess and Shel Silverstein are the two that first come to my mind

Have any of you had an experience where either you or one of your children or students learned a poem and it changed their life? I believe that children learn other subjects better when integrated with poetry. I think poetry makes a great introduction to all kinds of teaching topics. Are you about to teach subtraction? Use a poem to make it fun!

Keep on keepin' on...

Friday, June 22, 2012

Story Element #5: Theme

Exploring theme in picture books is what we do in our sleep. It's the underlying message we share with the world, but it shouldn't be a message you set out to deliver. Focus on the story! However all good stories have a universal take-away theme that gives us hope or lets us feel connected to one another. Even though theme should be subtle, especially in picture books, and we shouldn't set out to conquer it, it is a very important component of the story-telling process and should definitely be considered.

Today's consideration? Giraffes Can't Dance by Giles Andreae. This is one of the first picture books I bought as an adult. I was in college and not yet married. I was in the creative writing program and loved going to bookstores (and still do). When I picked up this book and read it right there in the bookstore, the last page gave me happy cold chills and I knew I had to have it for my future children. Not only is it a great story with fun word play, rhyme, animal characters, and an interesting setting, but the theme was the icing on the cake. It's why I bought the book. Let's take a look.

Title: Giraffes Can't Dance
Author: Giles Andreae
Illustrator: Guy Parker-Rees
Publisher: Orchard Books (1st ed. Purple Enterprises)
Year: 2001 (1st ed. 1999)
Word Count: 482


As the title implies, this book is about a giraffe, Gerald. Here's my synopsis. Gerald is good at eating leaves, but when he tried to run around, he tripped. The Jungle Dance was approaching and all the animals danced their cool dances. When it was Gerald's turn, the animals sneered at him and called him "weird." Gerald lost all confidence. He believed everyone about his not being able to dance. Some key phrases hint at the theme
"...he started walking home.He'd never felt so sad before--so sad and so alone."
On his walk home, he discovers the beautiful moon and meets a little cricket who encourages him:
"...sometimes when you're differentyou just need a different song."
Gerald listens for music in the breeze, the trees, the grass. The cricket plays some music too. Gerald starts moving his body and before long he felt so great he opens his eyes and realizes he is dancing! As the animals leave the dance, they see Gerald dancing and stop to stare. They compliment him:
"Gerald's the best dancer that we've ever, ever seen!"
They ask his secret, and he says that anyone can dance when they find music that they love. Oh, what a wonderful theme to explore! Yes, this book pretty much spells out the theme for you right there on the very last page, but it comes from straight from Gerald's mouth, which I decided not to quote to keep at least a little suspense for you when you run out to find a copy of this book for yourself. (Was that a run-on sentence?)

I wonder if Andreae set out to explore this theme and "teach" children that everyone can dance once you find the music you like. I guess it is possible, but I doubt it happened that way. I bet he had a great character, Gerald the giraffe, and said, "Hmmm... What is Gerald good at? What is he bad at? What does he want? He was bad at dancing. He wanted to fit it and feel accepted. He wanted to be able to dance, but more importantly I think he wanted to be happy and not feel alone. I bet Andreae explored how to resolve this. By telling the story that had to be told, I think the theme found it's way to the surface. 

Your Turn
You can start with the theme or you can end with the theme. Either way, you need to have a great story FIRST! Perhaps you want to explore the theme of a new girl moving into another girl's classroom and how they are rivals and try to become friends. The overall theme would be friendship. The takeaway theme, the underlying connection to all humans, will come out through the characters' actions and speech. When the story problem is resolved, you'll be able to say, "Yes! The theme was about such and such about friendship. Don't give up! Theme can be very hard to pinpoint, but when you do, you'll know it. Remember, it can be a great starting point, but don't set out to say, "I'm going to teach kids that when you move, everything will be okay once you make some friends." Everyone will SEE right through it and it likely won't come across as being subtle. Good luck!

Story Element #1: Character
Story Element #2: Conflict
Story Element #3: Plot
Story Element #4: Dialogue
Next time: Story Element #6: Pacing

What are some of your favorite themes to explore in your writing? 
OR 
What are some of the themes of some of your favorite picture books?

Keep on keepin' on...

Tuesday, June 19, 2012

2nd Monday: Pot-O-Gold Blogger Award #17

I know, I know... I've been non-existent for the past week and a half. I got sidetracked on a side business venture and I've been full force in that venue during the last week and a half. When the website is fully functional and presentable, I'll share the news with all of you.


So for now, enjoy this news instead...it's time to award the latest lucky blogger with the Pot-O-Gold Blogger AwardI created this award for excellent blogs based on... 
  • interesting and helpful content AND
  • visually appealing and easy-to-navigate design
It's an award that says, "Look at this awesome blog! There's a wealth of information here! If you visit once, you'll want to return again and again." In other words, it's like discovering a pot of gold.


This month's recipient goes out to the former Thing 1 Thing 2 Blog by Corey Rosen Schwartz. Her new blog was launched a few months ago in March, Blog of a Picture Book Ninja. Unfortunately, we all just missed her most recent giveaway of her latest forthcoming book, The Three Ninja Pigs. Corey blogs about her experiences in the writing world and inspires each of us to reach for our own goals. So, congratulations Corey, on winning this "prestigious" award.


Her blog is simple with a light-colored solid background. There is no home tab, but if you click on the title banner image, it takes you back to the home and refreshes it to the most recent blog post. Side bars are minimalist. If you haven't had the chance to meet Corey yet, take a moment to go introduce yourself. And check back regularly so you don't miss her next giveaway, like I did. For a little more info, you can also read an interview I did with Corey back in April 2011.


Ratings (out of 4):  
Content  (From the words of robot, Johnny Five, "Need more input!" Translation: I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!) 
Design  (I'm a sucker for "Home" tabs, sorry...)

The Rules (copy and paste):

  1. Say thank you to the person who gave it to you and link back to their blog.
  2. Post the award on your blog and link back to the WRITE WILD blog.
  3. Award FOUR bloggers this award and tell why each is a Pot-O-Gold!
  4. Share FOUR simple things about yourself regarding FAITH, HOPE, LOVE, and LUCK.
Be sure to check out past recipients of the Pot-O-Gold Blogger Award!

Keep on keepin' on...

Friday, June 8, 2012

Read-4-Luck: Do YOU Have a Hat? (PPBF)

If you missed the most recent Story Elements post, which focuses on the top ten elements of picture book writing, you can still read Wednesday's post about Story Element #4: Dialogue. 

READ-4-LUCK acts as a book recommendation, book review, teaching tip, and writing lesson for children, parents, teachers, and writers. This fun weekly feature began back in October 2010 with four books. It has since evolved into one book each week. In November 2011, I joined up with Susanna Leonard Hill and her Perfect Picture Book Fridays (PPBF).  

 = Not bad. Might read twice.
 = Fun read first few times. Would get from library again.
 = Very enjoyable. Wouldn't mind owning a copy.
 = Awesome! Multiple readings are never tiresome. May just have to buy it.


This week's Read-4-Luck pick is Do You Have a Hat? by Eileen Spinelli and illustrated by Geraldo Valerio. 
This book describes a great variety of hats worn by celebrities throughout history - in rhyme!


Publisher: Simon and Schuster
Year: 2004
Word Count: 426
Book Level: 2.2
Age: 4-8
Topic: hats, history, biography 
Theme: gotta get a hat!

Jacket Flap:
A fancy hat. A hat that's plain. 
A hat for keeping off the rain.

A glowing hat. A hat with fruit.
A hat for that new dress or suit.

All herein have hats, it's true --
Fantastic, magnificent hats! Do you?

RATINGS

CHILDREN: 
Kids that love dress up will love this book. We have read this book numerous times before we noticed a fun pattern in the illustrations. They like to see the different kinds of hats.

PARENTS: 
Eileen Spinelli is awesome! The rhyme is a bit sing-song, but it's fun to teach your kids about the historical figures. The end pages give a couple sentences about each person. And of course the illustrations are fun.

TEACHERS: 
Kindergarten teachers could use to supply their dress up centers and teach kids about the different hats. Could teach rhyme (has a great repeating line for teaching reading early in the year). Could use to talk about seasons and which hats would match which seasons best.

This book is perfect for 2nd or 3rd grades. Read the book aloud to the class. Assign individuals or pairs a section to memorize for a PTO play. Teach more in depth about each person: Abraham Lincoln, Walt Whitman, Sally Ride, Charlie Chaplin and many more.

WRITERS: 
Another rhyming wonderland! A bit sing-song, though. I love the whole concept for the entire book. Too clever. Wish I had thought of it. I don't know how many times I have checked this book out of the library. Maybe it's time to buy it?

What is your favorite kind of hat? I like the floppy hat with flowers. Then again, I did dress up as Charlie Chaplin during Homecoming week in high school.

Be sure to visit other "perfect picture books" at Susanna Leonard Hill's blog.

Keep on keepin' on...

Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Story Element #4: Dialogue

Hi, everyone! In case you missed my announcement the other day about my schedule change, Story Elements is now featured on Wednesdays. You can see the full new schedule in the right-hand column or the previous link. 

The "long" awaited Story Element is here! Today we will discuss #4, DIALOGUE. I have been told that I am pretty good with dialogue. However, I am struggling quite a bit with how to share how to write about it. Kids like to talk, even when they are characters in a picture book (or novel). They need to sound authentic, but not necessarily accurate. 


Accurate vs. Authentic
Accurate dialogue would be every single thing a child actually says verbatim. Authentic dialogue is bringing the essence of the language through the economy of words. In picture books, words have to be economical. For example:
Accurate: "Mom! But, but, but, I really wanted oatmeal for breakfast, not these yukky-looking eggs! You know, my friends always have cereal. Why can't we have cereal every day too? Huh?"
Authentic: "Not eggs!" Ed whined to his mom. "Can't I have oatmeal or cereal instead?"
Balance
In every story, there has to be a balance of dialogue and telling. In picture books, the dialogue is usually less than half the story. Yes, some books have much more dialogue than others, and a few books have hardly any at all, but almost all picture books have at least some. It's important that you know your character and your story so you can feel where the balance should lie. Not every page will have characters speaking. More than likely, they'll show a character doing something.
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Today's Model is Sixteen Cows by Lisa Wheeler
Title: Sixteen Cows
Author: Lisa Wheeler
Illustrator: Kurt Cyrus
Publisher: Harcourt
Year: 2002
Word Count: 545


First Page: (half spread) No dialogue.
Spread 1: Gene sings his come-home song and the cows all answer, "Moo."
Spread 2: none
Spread 3: Sue sings her come-home song and all her cows answer, "Moo."
Spread 4: none
Spread 5: none
Spread 6: Sue gets mad and tells her cows: "Don't mingle with those low-down cows," she cried. "That just won't do!"
Spread 7: Sue and Gene's come-home songs get all mixed up.
Spread 8: 
Cowboy Gene got hoppin' mad. "You're messin' up my song!"
Cowgirl Sue was hoppin', too. "You made me sing it wrong!"
"I'm singin' all my cows back home!"
"I'm singin' mine home, too!"
Spread 9: none
Spread 10: none
Spread 11: none
Spread 12: Cowboy Gene yells, "Stop! If we keep us this singin' feud, our cows are sure to drop!" Sue agrees, "Sure enough!"
Spread 13: 
Gene mumbled, "What nice cows you have."
Sue blushed. "I like yours, too. Together they're one happy herd."
Spread 14: none
Last page: (half spread) The cows say, "MOO!"

With two half pages, we can kind of say there are 15 spreads for the sake of math and trying to create accurate percentages. So, 8 of the 15 spreads have dialogue. It's a little more than half, but if you go by word count, it's much less than half. (No, I didn't actually count.) Balance is important, but it will usually play out naturally. It's more important to focus on what's being said. With this model picture book, the dialogue really helps move the plot forward. We get a deeper glimpse into the two characters. Fun dialogue also makes for a great read aloud experience. 
Your Turn
Take one of your mss and look at how much dialogue you have used. See if it is balanced. If it's a bit heavy on the dialogue, try to condense it and tell just a little. Or reword some of the dialogue sections to be more authentic instead of accurate. If your ms is too light on the dialogue, try turning some of your telling or actions into dialogue. Future posts will go more in depth on how to do this, but it won't hurt to give it a try before then.


Story Element #1: Character
Story Element #2: Conflict
Story Element #3: Plot
Next week: Story Element #5: Theme

Keep on keepin' on...

Monday, June 4, 2012

HIGH FIVE #17: Kate Slater and the Great Mystery of Magpie's Treasure


Hi, Kate! Thanks for being a part of HIGH FIVE today! Congratulations on your first written picture book being published as an author/illustrator! You are the first illustrator I have interviewed in my series. Let’s jump in and get started!

Title: Magpie’s Treasure
Author: Kate Slater
Illustrator: Kate Slater
Publisher: Andersen Press
Release date: 28th October 2010
Word count: 450
Short summary or blurb:

Magnus Magpie is a bird with an eye for burglary. He steals only the brightest, shiniest, most dazzling things and stashes them secretly in a hollow at the top of his tree. But do all these riches make him happy? It takes a trip to the moon for Magnus to discover that all that glitters is not gold and that true happiness can often be found at home.

Question ONE: What are some of your favorite picture books? Two for stories and two for illustrations.

These books are all chosen for both stories and illustrations, I think all my favourites have both! It’s been so difficult to decide; there are many, many, many more that I love equally.

  1. Where’s Julius - John Burningham
  2. I Want My Hat Back - Jon Klassen
  3. Les Poings Sur Les Iles - Elise Fontenaile and Violeta Lopiz
  4. Otto the Book Bear - Katie Cleminson

Question TWO: Despite not having any children of your own, how do you feel that you were drawn to write for them?

I have always wanted to write and illustrate children’s books, ever since I was about seven! I had a teacher who told my class about a nine year old girl who wrote a series of children’s books called The Garden Gang. I loved writing stories and drawing so I decided I wanted to be published too, preferably by the time I was eight, so I could be the youngest published author! Twelve years later I applied to the fantastic illustration course at Kingston University and when I graduated in 2008 I was able to visit a few publishers with my portfolio. One of those was Andersen Press who published Magpie’s Treasure.

Question THREE: How might teachers use your book in the classroom? Do you have any lesson plans available?

I love visiting schools and have done lots of collage workshops with children of all ages. Birds are fantastic to collage and I often take in a giant tree for all the finished birds to perch in, it’s great to leave the school with a huge piece of collaborative artwork up on their wall! I’ve also just heard that my local primary school is going to do a whole week’s work based on Magpie’s Treasure. They’re even creating a crime scene in the school for one of his burglaries, which sounds fantastic! It’s a great way of getting the whole school involved in one project.

Magpie’s Treasure has also been selected by the Children Thinking website as a philosophy resource for young children, which is great as it’s not something I would have thought about!

Question(s) FOUR: How many books had you illustrated before you published YOUR story? How was being the author/illustrator different from being the illustrator only? Do you think one is easier or harder than the other? Do you prefer one over the other? Do you see yourself as mainly an illustrator or more as an author? Do you have more writing projects in the works? Do you have an agent? If so, how did that happen? Does he or she represent your illustrating or your writing or both?

Magpie’s Treasure is my first children’s book. I’ve since illustrated another, ABC London, which is published by Frances Lincoln Children’s Books in June and have just started work illustrating a book for Barefoot Books. I’m also currently working on a new story of my own.

Magpie’s Treasure was the story I wrote and illustrated for my final major project at university. When I took it to Andersen I think they were surprised by how little it needed changing, but that was probably because I’d been working on it for about 7 months beforehand! While the story hardly altered, the illustrations are quite different from those I first showed them. I was working in 3D collage and suspending pieces of the illustration from wires which they thought were a bit too sophisticated for a children’s book, so they asked me to try working in flat collage. I also made the illustrations much brighter and they became a lot more detailed as I developed my flat collage style. The illustrations definitely take far, far longer than the writing, but it usually works best if I think about the illustrations as I write the story. I tend to try and write the story first and then end up with a ridiculously high word count that will never fit into a picture book, so I’ve started to try and plan the page layouts a bit as I go along.

Being the illustrator is quite different from being the author too, although for ABC London the writing doesn’t play as much of a role as the only text on each page is “A is for Art, B is for Brick Lane” etc. With the book I’m illustrating now in some ways it’s less of a balancing act, because the text and the pacing has already been decided on, so I can focus on telling the story in an engaging, unique way and making sure the illustrations fit in with the rhythm of the text while also adding to the story. If it was my own story I’d constantly be thinking about cutting out a line here, or moving this bit of text to the next page.
Magnus the Magpie Perching for the reading
I don’t have a preference for one or the other, although I’d love to write and illustrate together all the time. I think it would be quite strange to write a story for someone else to illustrate but I really enjoy illustrating other peoples’ stories. I definitely see myself as more of an illustrator, but that’s because illustrating is what I do the majority of the time. I’ve  illustrated for magazines, book covers, advertising and I also make and sell my work online (www.katefete.etsy.com) and in shops and galleries, whereas I’ve only written one children’s book so far!

I don’t have an agent. At the moment I promote my work myself, although it’s something I would consider in the future.

Question FIVE: As an illustrator, what are some writing tips you can offer to writers seeking publication? What types of things should writers try to consider from an illustrator’s perspective?

I think the main thing is to leave room in the story for the illustrations. Not just in terms of page layout but remember that the pictures will tell just as much of your story as the words do, so you don’t need to describe every little thing. You could give quite detailed notes to explain what’s going on in the story, but it’s also good to leave the illustrator to interpret your text on their own, rather than having very set ideas about exactly what each page will look like. In general, most children’s books are 32 pages and you end up with 24 of them to tell the story, or 12 double page spreads. I find it so difficult to stick to this when I’m writing though. I usually have to cut great chunks out of the text to make it fit which can be quite painful! Usually I find that if I leave the story for a while, when I come back to it I can be much more ruthless!

Thank you so much for being with us today. I appreciate you sharing your knowledge and experience with us. Hope to see around the web in the future.

Feel free to ask Kate more questions in the comments below and to visit her website.

Saturday, June 2, 2012

Goodbye, Stories...

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ANNOUNCEMENT: This just in (beep, beep, beep) WRITE WILD will no longer have the feature called   "Pass-the-Paper". My former schedule looked like this:

MON: Story Elements
WED: Read-4-Luck (PPBF)
SAT: changes weekly...
1st-High Five Interview
2nd-Pot-O-Gold Award
3rd-Pass the Paper Stories
4th-Contest Winners...
...and Announcements

Pass-the-Paper was fun while it lasted, but I never got a large enough crowd going to have anything come from it. Take a look:
  1. 7-17-10  Tabitha Loves to Dance CLOSED 10-1-11 (11 comments)
  2. 7-24-10  Fred's Bike CLOSED 9-25-11 (15 comments)
  3. 8-28-10  Janelle in the Candy Shop CLOSED 3-4-11 (9 comments)
  4. 10-15-11 I Love the Smell of Skunk CLOSED 12-31-11 (9 comments)
  5. 2-18-12 Leonard the Pig CLOSED 3-23-12 (19 comments)
  6. 3-24-12 The Picnic Party NOW OPEN (you are welcome to please help finish the story)
See? Story 1 took nearly 14 months to finish. Story 2 took 14 months. Story 3 took 6 months. Story 4 took 2.5 months. Story 5 took 5 weeks. And story 6? Well, it's been 2 months and it's still not finished. I just don't have enough participants to keep it as an ongoing feature. So, I've changed my schedule up quite a bit. Here's the new one:

MON 1: High Five Interview
MON 2: Pot-O-Gold Award
MON 3: Poetry Monday
MON 4: Contest Winners...
...and Announcements
WED: Story Elements
FRI: Read-4-Luck (PPBF)

So instead of having posts on Mon, Wed, Sat, I'm going back to Mon, Wed, Fri, but rearranging it a bit. Today is June 2nd, the first Saturday of the month. Normally, I would have my HIGH FIVE interview featured today, but I'm shifting it over to the first Monday of the month, which will be this Monday, June 4. Please come back and be inspired by my first ever interview with an author/illustrator! See you then!

Friday, June 1, 2012

And the Winner Is...

The winner of my random Summer Splash Giveaway Blog Hop is...

...Tiffany Drew...

...Congratulations! I'll e-mail you to get your mailing address so I can send you Zaira and the Dolphins. Have a good weekend!

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