Saturday, May 12, 2012

Pot-O-Gold Blogger Award #16: Tara Lazar


First, today I am celebrating my 16th wedding anniversary! Going to have some needed hubby alone time and a nice dinner. 


And now...it's time to award another lucky blogger with the Pot-O-Gold Blogger Award! I created this award for excellent blogs based on... 



  • interesting and helpful content AND
  • visually appealing and easy-to-navigate design. 
It's an award that says, "Look at this awesome blog! There's a wealth of information here! If you visit once, you'll want to return again and again." In other words, it's like discovering a pot of gold.


Today's award goes out to none other than the great Tara Lazar at Writing for Kids (While Raising Them). Tara has two picture books coming out (2013 and 2014). She is the creator of PiBoIdMo (Picture Book Idea Month), which is hosted the entire month of November. Her blog features lots of giveaways, book reviews, agent and publisher information, other authors, and more! You really don't want to miss out. You can also read an insightful interview with Tara. Go connect!

Ratings (out of 4):  Content  Design 



The Rules (copy and paste):
  1. Say thank you to the person who gave it to you and link back to their blog.
  2. Post the award on your blog and link back to the WRITE WILD blog.
  3. Award FOUR bloggers this award and tell why each is a Pot-O-Gold!
  4. Share FOUR simple things about yourself regarding FAITH, HOPE, LOVE, and LUCK.
Be sure to check out past recipients of the Pot-O-Gold Blogger Award!

Keep on keepin' on...








Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Read-4-Luck (PPBF): Story of a Cockroach

The other day, I had an epiphany on yet another way how running and writing are a lot alike.

I know that not everything you write will get published. This is a sad, but true fact. I've heard that only 10-20% of a writer's mss will be published, maybe even closer to 5%. If I write crap 80% of the time, will the 20% that's good be the percentage that gets published? Sorry, I don't think it works that way. 

When I realized that not every run is a race, I was like WHOA! Even in running! It's the SAME! You better not run like crap the other 80% of the time though, or your race will be crap too. 

So write like you mean it. Make it shine. Give your personal best. Your PR (personal record) is right around the corner. I just set a new PR for my 5k (31:23). And a new 2 miler PR (20:15). Gotta go write! Log those miles... I mean, words...


Book Review: Story of a Cockroach || writers who run | read for luck | children's book reviews | picture book recommendations


READ-4-LUCK acts as a book recommendation, book review, teaching tip, and writing lesson for children, parents, teachers, and writers. This fun weekly feature began back in October 2010 with four books. It has since evolved into one book each week. In November 2011, I joined up with Susanna Leonard Hill and her Perfect Picture Book Fridays (PPBF).

 = Not bad. Might read twice.
 = Fun read first few times. Would get from library again.
 = Very enjoyable. Wouldn't mind owning a copy.
 = Awesome! Never tiresome for children, parents, teachers, or writers. May just have to buy it.
 

This week's pick is Story of a Cockroach by Carmen Gil and illustrated by Sonja Wimmer.

"This is the story of Anastasia, a cockroach who dreamed of being accepted and becoming famous and important like her distant relatives the Egyptian beetles, sacred insects that were treated like royalty. Transformed by a wave of the magic wand of Fairy Brunhilda, Anastasia was turned into a princess, then a rich and famous girl. When you finish the book, you will look at cockroaches in a different light…" 
 
Publisher: Cuento de Luz  
Year: 2011 (original title in Spanish)
Word Count: VERY long (but doesn't seem like it)
Book Level: 4.2 ?
Age: 4-8
Topic: animals, family, beetles, princesses
Theme: acceptance of oneself, helping others

First Lines:
My name is Anastasia and I'm a cockroach. Like everyone else of my species for the past three hundred thousand years, I like to live in nice, warm, safe places. Myself in particular, I prefer the cracks along the baseboards in the living room, the gaps in the kitchen cupboards or the bathroom pipes. But don't think my life is easy. It isn't!
RATINGS

CHILDREN: 
Pretty long, but reads quickly. The funniest part is when Anastasia says, "I couldn't scratch my nose if it itched, I couldn't yawn and of course, I couldn't even think of passing gas." Perfect for girls (princesses) and boys (cockroaches)!


PARENTS: 
Could use as a jumping off point to respect all of God's creatures, if you felt so inclined. Personally, I do kill bugs if they are in my house, but never when found in nature (though as a teenager, I did save spiders).

TEACHERS:  
Best suited as a writing lesson. Has some good vocabulary. Luxurious, broomophobia, night owl, Cucaracha, despite, academy, tristesse, rue, disadvantages, dynamic, tactfully, muddle, prevent, implement, transform, and more. 


Could incorporate with research on different kinds of insects. There are lots mentioned (crickets, beetles, fruit flies). Could research how cockroaches are viewed and/or used in different areas of the world, including different species of cockroaches. Could also use as part of a unit on self-acceptance. Possible writing prompts:  think of something that somebody could be afraid of. Give it a name (broomophobia). Write a story about it. Think of something you want to be when you grow up. Write about all the BAD stuff it might have as a part of that job.  

WRITERS: 
Originally written in Spanish, this is a wonderful translation! The humor is not lost at all. Lots of fun allusions to keep adults interested and amused. Since this book is not listed on my favorite database, I don't know how many words it has. A great exercise would be to type it up and get a word count. Then, study the pacing by summarizing each spread.




Be sure to visit other "perfect picture books" at Susanna Leonard Hill's blog.


Keep on keepin' on...

Tuesday, May 8, 2012

Story Element #1: CHARACTER

Story Element #1: CHARACTER
Welcome to STORY ELEMENTS, the place to learn about the top 10 elements of the writing craft. The craft of writing picture books includes: character, conflict, plot, dialogue, theme, pacing, word play, patterns, rhyme, and beginnings and endings. The first five also relate to novels; the last five are specific to picture books.

This page is dedicated to Story Element #1: CHARACTER. The following list includes all the books I've shared online to help learn about character. Enjoy!
  1. Baloney (Henry P.) by Jon Scieszka
  2. A Penguin Pup for Pinkerton by Steven Kellogg
  3. Woe is Moe by Diane Stanley
  4. Shark vs. Train by Chris Barton
  5. Too Many Turkeys by Linda White

Contributions from PB 14:14 in 2014 participants:

Contributions from PB 14:14 in 2015 participants:

  • 1st one goes here...

Monday, May 7, 2012

Top 10 Story Elements for Picture Books


The writing craft takes years to master. And even then, we are constantly learning and improving and trying to make our latest idea work for us. I have recently been thinking about my blog and how little I have posted about the actual craft of writing in the last several months.

Top 10 Story Elements for Picture Books || novel writing elements | the craft of writing | how to write a book

Today I'm writing about something that will hopefully help each of you (and myself) learn to write better, even novelists. The craft of writing. The writer's craft. Let's look at some books that model those writing elements. Specifically, picture books. Don't get me wrong though. Just because we'll be looking at picture books does not mean that they can't help writers of other audiences too.

The top 10 story elements for picture books (and the top 5 story elements for novels) are as follows:
  1. character
  2. conflict
  3. plot
  4. dialogue
  5. theme
  6. pacing
  7. word play
  8. patterns
  9. rhyme
  10. beginnings and endings










Now, these elements of story I didn't just pull out of a hat. I thought long and hard about each of them. The first five apply to novels as well as picture books, even short stories. I even put them in the best possible order of importance I could manage. Of course, they are all important. But you really do have to have a character. The last five are mostly for picture books, although some can be for novels. And of course, rhyme is not for all picture books, but it is an important element in many of them.


Teaching with picture books is becoming more and more common in schools, from grade 2 through grade 12. I aim to teach with picture books too. To help writers use picture books to learn writing techniques for their own writer's craft. Using picture books to teach writing will hopefully be just as much fun for you as it will be for me. Note that there may be an occasional spoiler, especially when dealing with #10 (Beginnings and Endings). 

In the coming weeks, I'll go into more depth using the examples listed below and give more in depth definitions of the top ten story elements for writing picture books. The words in (parentheses) list other similar elements that are included in the category.
  1. Character (point of view)
    • Baloney (Henry P.) by Jon Scieszka and Lane Smith
  2. Conflict (action)
    • The Science Project that Almost Ate the School by Judy Sierra
  3. Plot (rising action, falling action)
    • The Plot Chickens by Mary Jane and Herm Auch
  4. Dialogue (voice)
    • Sixteen Cows by Lisa Wheeler
  5. Theme (emotions, premise)
    • Giraffes Can't Dance by Giles Andreae and Guy Parker-Rees
  6. Pacing (page turns, book dummies, template)
    • Halloweiner by Dav Pilkey
  7. Word Play (metaphors, puns, word play, verbs, synonyms, alliteration, vocabulary, etc.)
    • The Library Dragon by Carmen Agra Deedy
  8. Patterns (rules of 3, cycles, repetition, etc.)
    • Big Chickens by Leslie Helakoski and Henry Cole
  9. Rhyme (rhythm, meter, song)
    • Because You Are My Baby by Sherry North and Marcellus Hall
  10. Beginnings and Endings (duh! starts and finishes...)
    • I Love You the Purplest by Barbara M. Joosse










There you have it, folks! The goal is to share a new book that features one of these crafts on the 14th of every month. Just click on the links above to take you to the main page for each craft. It'll list MORE than just the book shown here. And over time, each list will grow. Hope to see you there!

Keep on keepin' on...

Saturday, May 5, 2012

HIGH FIVE #16: Brenda Reeves Sturgis and 10 Tips in the Road


So your debut picture book is out. Here’s a big HIGH FIVE congratulations to you! 

Title: 10 Turkeys in the Road
Author: Brenda Reeves Sturgis
Illustrator: David Slonim
Publisher: Marshall Cavendish, Scholastic Book Clubs
Release date: September 2011, November 2011
Word count: 500
Short summary or blurb: When 10 turkeys block a country road, they cause a farmer to become increasingly frustrated with their silly circus antics while they fly away one at a time, until they get exactly what they are really after all along.

Question ONE: What are three of your favorite picture books? Just three mind you.
Mrs. Biddlebox by the late Linda Smith, Sixteen Cows by Lisa Wheeler, and The Giving Tree by Shel Silverstein

I love Sixteen Cows too! We've checked it out from the library numerous times!

Question TWO: How often did you read to your children when they were younger; do you feel like you have a special bond with your children because of books? 
I always read to all of my children nightly. They were stellar students because of their love for books and reading and writing. I read to them all from the moment I found I was pregnant with each one and continued reading until they read books themselves.

Wow! Womb readers...

Question THREE: How might teachers use your book in the classroom?
I have extensive lesson plans for teachers on my website at www.brendareevessturgis.com. There are free downloads which include coloring pages, puzzles, puppets, songs, and games. My lesson plans were created for Kindergarten through 6th grade.

Question FOUR:
What was your road to publication like?
a)      Can you talk a bit about revisions, submitting to publishers, and how you feel about agents? 

I am a stickler for revision, and am an incessant reviser and tweaker. I worked hard for many years, attended conferences, joined critique groups, and learned how to write. My journey began in 2004 after I was invited to and attended a school visit with author Lynn Plourde. Kirsten Cappy of Curious City recommended me. I worked with Kirsten on a major marketing campaign where we launched to 17,000 librarians across the country. Kirsten Cappy was integral in getting my name out there. The PTO president, Susan Hupper Witt was amazing at handling things behind the scenes, and the school visit was magical. The kids were inquisitive and funny, thoughtful and delightful. I felt that I was a duck in the water, and that I'd been born to do exactly what I was doing in that moment.

I hosted Lisa Wheeler in a boot camp workshop here in Maine where I learned tons. I organized it, advertised for it, and we brought her here from Michigan for 4 days. I e-mailed Lisa and asked her if she would come. I advertised for many months to get participants, and hosted the 8-hour boot camp. The attendees were blown away by her presentation. Anybody who can get to one of her boot camps should definitely go. They'll learn a plethora of knowledge. I learned an immense amount from her. She is one of the best picture book writers, and certainly one of the top three rhymers in our business. It was a true blessing to learn from her and to get to know her. In 2007 and 2008, I also attended RUCCL (Rutgers Council of Children’s Literature).

I sold 10 Turkeys in the Road in 2008 to Margery Cuyler via a previous agent, and it took 3 years before it hit the shelves. It’s been a fun and rewarding journey. I am now represented by the wonderful Karen Grencik of Red Fox Literary. She offered representation after my book was sold. We’re very hopeful for 2012 and have some polished projects out and about.


b)      Tell us a bit about any illustrator notes you may have used, and how your title may have evolved.

10 Turkeys in the Road had quite a few illustration notes because the turkeys were actually doing different things that the text suggested in the beginning. My good friend Shari Dash Greenspan, editor of Flashlight Press had some great input for the very first illustration notes, and they evolved from there. I sent 10 Turkeys in the Road to Shari Dash Greenspan, she loved it but it wasn't a good fit for flashlight. Shari sent along in-depth illustration suggestions, she is an incredible visionary. I met her back in 2005 when I queried her and we became professional friends. I value her opinions greatly, and run many things by her for her editorial eye. David Slonim, the illustrator, had some great ideas as well, and brought his own creative genius to the picture book project. The title was always 10 Turkeys in the Road but in the beginning the number 10 was written out as TEN. However, the publisher wanted it to be numerical to be better identified by schools and libraries as a counting book.

Question FIVE: What are your top 5 writing tips for writers seeking publication?
  1. Learn how to write a picture book. Learn how to create a dummy and a storyboard.
  2. Research the market. Research editors and agents thoroughly.
  3. Keep a notebook of ideas and favorite words. Carry it with you.
  4. Get out away from your computer, live and learn, because ideas are formed where you least expect them.
  5. Do NOT quit!
Thanks so much for visiting with us today! I hope others were inspired as much as I was. Hope you sell another book in the near future. My children love your book and the humorous illustrations. 


You can learn more about Brenda Reeves Sturgis at her website. Be sure to check out more interviews with debut authors for more inspiration and tips.

Wednesday, May 2, 2012

Read-4-Luck (PPBF): Drops of Life

Before we get to the goods this week, I'd like to congratulate the winner of my A to Z challenge, which was to guess or discover my secret message. Throughout the month, I left clues. The answer is my April quote for the month:
"A book is the only place in which you can examine a fragile thought without breaking it, or explore an explosive idea without fear it will go off in your face....It is one of the few havens remaining where [your] mind can get both provocation and privacy."
-Lord Byron
Congratulations goes out to none other than our famous Susanna Leonard Hill! Thanks for playing! And her reward? A choice of two different picture books. Today's review happens to be the book she chose! ENJOY!

READ-4-LUCK acts as a book recommendation, book review, teaching tip, and writing lesson for children, parents, teachers, and writers. This fun weekly feature began back in October 2010 with four books. It has since evolved into one book each week. In November 2011, I joined up with Susanna Leonard Hill and her Perfect Picture Book Fridays (PPBF). 

 = Not bad. Might read twice.
 = Fun read first few times. Would get from library again.
 = Very enjoyable. Wouldn't mind owning a copy.
 = Awesome! Never tiresome for children, parents, teachers, or writers. May just have to buy it.

This week's pick is Drops of Life by Esko-Pekka Tiitinen and illustrated by Nikolai Tiitinen.
"This fable is a warm and happy tale about the importance of cooperation. It is also a well-known children's play that has been performed in over eighty countries, originating in Finland."

Publisher: Cuento de Luz  
Year: 2012
Word Count: long
Book Level: 4.2 ?
Age: 6-10
Topic: animals and the environment
Theme: cooperation

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