How can picture book authors use this hook? Easy! It's called a page turn. In its simplest form, it's really just the element of story coming into play. If you care about the character, then you will want to know what will happen next. Picture books are short. You turn the page approximately 14 times. It's like having 14 mini chapters! Granted, we don't get to choose where the page turn will occur, but it IS good practice to write your book with at least an idea of where you think the page turns will occur. To do this, you can use a storyboard.
How to Analyze a Picture Book with a Story Board
Ways to create a hook, or page turn, in a picture book:
- Use plot structure to enhance curiosity about what will happen next.
- Use questions in the text.
- Create questions in the minds of your readers.
- Put MC in an uncomfortable situation.
- Have MC take action to solve a problem. (This is a surefire way to ask "What do you think will happen?")
- Introduce a new problem.
- Twist the plot some more.
- Show MC emotions. (This brings the question WHY into play. Readers will turn the page to find out.)
I love this - in the end it's just a condensed version of creating a hook for *any* book :)
ReplyDeleteit does make such a difference when you see the story on pages... so get a feel for how it would read.
ReplyDeleteI like your summary on how to hook a reader, especially the one about creating questions in the reader's mind that they want answered. I think that one neatly encapsulates some of the others too.
ReplyDeleteThe whole 'hook' thing is the bane of my existence, and I'm sure I'm not alone. Why can't we just write a story and be done with it? Unfortunately if we want anyone else to read our story the 'hook' is a necessary evil...