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Saturday, August 21, 2010

The Suspense is Killing Me

I really want to know what's inside that green envelope that Fred stuck inside the spokes of bicycle wheel.  Now the bully is after him 'cause he said the envelope was his.  So Fred grabbed the package and ran toward his friends.  They're opening it right now!  And the bully is almost to their little huddle.

So what's inside, guys?  Someone, please finish this silly little story we've started.  The suspense is killing me.

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